tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6952000018215231206.post6367385222650713224..comments2010-05-03T15:33:18.903-05:00Comments on Honors Physics: Safety firstCarlyFhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00398038266903295954noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6952000018215231206.post-43202101746347533382010-02-21T17:11:56.904-06:002010-02-21T17:11:56.904-06:00I liked how you made use of Newton's laws, but...I liked how you made use of Newton's laws, but I recommend that you go into more depth of the topic. You should also elongate the story because there is no physics content in it. Otherwise, you have a good story.Cyrushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08056136757508342679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6952000018215231206.post-18741947039394847572010-02-02T09:51:27.714-06:002010-02-02T09:51:27.714-06:00Please re-write your story with appropriate gramma...Please re-write your story with appropriate grammar, you need to improve your punctuation so that the story reads easily. Adding an explanation using Newton's First Law is important, just mentioning inertia does not provide a complete description.dgendehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02179741683558253638noreply@blogger.com